Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it, to what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
The biggest problem of the world is crime and majority of people think that it cannot be solved by any measure. However, I disagree with this notion I believe that, governments and individuals can play the vital role to tackle the situation of crime.
Numerous of steps can be taken by the higher authorities to prevent the crime. First and foremost, governments should tight the securities it colonies and streets thus, people's activities will monitored by the police. Apart from it, cameras must be installed on every public places which ultimately leads to stop the robbery, theft and murdered. However, rehabilitation service should be available, if any person do crime he or she must be made to do unpaid community work. Therefore, they will learn to work among the people and stop the path of crime, which will also an example in the front of others and they will think twice before committing any crime.
In addition, it is also the responsibility of individuals to contribute for prevent the crime. Firstly, parents and teachers must teach the good and moral values to the children because children are the future generation thus if they will learn good things in their life and definitely they will carry out in their future life and avoid the paths of crime.
In conclusion, although crime is the rampant situation in the whole world, but it can be tackled by the help of governments and also the role of people. In my opinion, rehabilitation services and tight securities by the higher authorities and teachers and parents can improve the situation at the great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: monitor
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to do unpaid community work. Therefore, they will learn to work among the people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67286097421 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.879659548 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207325201659 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882146553566 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527222013241 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129622966606 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521579630019 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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