Young people enjoy life more than the older people do.
family: "Times New Roman";">Many people may disagree with the statement’ young people enjoy life more than older people do, however, In my opinion, I agree with this statement, and I also have the three commonly reasons for supporting my viewpoints.
family: "Times New Roman"; min-height: 15px;">
family: "Times New Roman";">Without a doubt, when they were young people, they need not try hard work to encourage their families, neither making a high salary to support their families, especially large family nor being the leader of the family. In general, most young students only concentrate mainly on learning in school. From the above reason, it can show that being young people more enjoyable life more than older people.
family: "Times New Roman"; min-height: 15px;">
family: "Times New Roman";">Second of all, young people have much time for entertainment and relaxation more than adult people. On the weekend, almost all young people do not go to school, so they can relax or doing activities outside his home with their friends both Saturday and Sunday, such as playing soccer, swim, video game, going to movies and so on. On the other hand, older people are still work in their homes, such as cleaning rooms, washing uniforms, and cooking for their families.
family: "Times New Roman"; min-height: 15px;">
family: "Times New Roman";">Last but not least, although almost older people have much money more than young people, they should try to be more frugal so that they can save for their families and expense in the future. For example, Jone’s family, who lives in a slum and a large family that consists of 10 persons, works in small industry and meager income. After getting a salary, Jone needs to manage payroll to support his family. Moreover, he has to give money to his son every day to expense in son’s school while his son spends money extravagantly and enjoys every day, but his son does not know that his father is so tired from work.
family: "Times New Roman"; min-height: 15px;">
family: "Times New Roman";">All in all, I can conclude that young people enjoy life more than older people do because they do not know hard work and solve abundant problems in their family and more free time for entertainment.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Young people enjoy life more than the older people do. 68
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 73
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
family: 'Times New Roman';'>Man...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...reasons for supporting my viewpoints. family: 'Times New Roman'; min-heigh...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...njoyable life more than older people. family: 'Times New Roman'; min-heigh...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...orms, and cooking for their families. family: 'Times New Roman'; min-heigh...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...hat his father is so tired from work. family: 'Times New Roman'; min-heigh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, while, as to, for example, in general, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51742627346 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71437441263 2.67179642975 139% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512064343164 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2307580533 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.5 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27281918161 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151629722497 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160982055406 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160082171459 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163847013107 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.