You are doing a three-months' course at a training institute. You have recently been offered a full-time job at a company and you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to the course instructor. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the job you have been offered
• and ask if they have an evening course that you can continue
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am doing a three months course at your reputed institute. I am very happy and satisfied with the institute but now I am unable to continue my course as I have got a full time job in a company.I cannot leave the job because it is a great opportunity for me as I have got this job in one of the popular restaurant of our city. Moreover I am facing some financial problems and this job offers me a handsome salary.
Let me explain my job .I have got a job of receptionist in a restaurant.I have fixed working hours i.e. 9:00a.m. to 3:00p.m. as the course time is in morning so it is impossible for me to attend the classes.
I hope you will consider my problem.I would like to know if your institute provide evening classes for working persons than I will be able to continue my course.Waiting to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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- You are doing a three-months' course at a training institute. You have recently been offered a full-time job at a company and you can not continue the course.Write a letter to the course instructor. In the letter:•explain why you cannot continue th 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your reputed institute. I am very happy and satisfied with the institute but now...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e to continue my course as I have got a full time job in a company.I cannot leave the job...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...I have got a full time job in a company.I cannot leave the job because it is a gr...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have got a full time job in a company.I cannot leave the job because it is a gr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... of the popular restaurant of our city. Moreover I am facing some financial problems and...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...handsome salary. Let me explain my job .I have got a job of receptionist in a re...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ndsome salary. Let me explain my job .I have got a job of receptionist in a res...
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Suggestion: I
...t a job of receptionist in a restaurant.I have fixed working hours i.e. 9:00a.m. ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ossible for me to attend the classes. I hope you will consider my problem.I wou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
.... I hope you will consider my problem.I would like to know if your institute pr...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I hope you will consider my problem.I would like to know if your institute pr...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rsons than I will be able to continue my course.Waiting to hear from you soon. ...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Waiting
...n I will be able to continue my course.Waiting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29341317365 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68998938368 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4815890528 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 76.5299724578 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290359846216 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127358515285 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100458324384 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1736354786 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061927232978 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.