The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement production and concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given diagrams illustrate the phases and apparatus used in cement production and how cement is utilized to produce concrete for construction.
Overall, it has five stages in the production of cement from mixing of raw materials to make packing of cement into bags.However, concrete production is easy process by mixing of four ingredients into a concrete mixer.
If we look at left diagram,limestone and clay are crushed to make powder.These powders are then mixed before passed thorough the rotating heater. During this process, external heat is supplied.Next stage is that these mixtures are grinned to produce cement.These cement is packed with bags and transported to the construction to produce concrete.
In terms of right diagram, a half gravel, quarter sand, a tenth water and 15% of cement are mixed in the cylindrical drum according to clockwise direction. Finally, concerte is produced.By contrast, cement is the essential ingredient for the manufacturing of concrete.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that the school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give own opinion. 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 84
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement production and concrete for building purposes Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...als to make packing of cement into bags.However, concrete production is easy process by...
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Suggestion: , limestone
...e mixer. If we look at left diagram,limestone and clay are crushed to make powder.The...
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Suggestion: These
...one and clay are crushed to make powder.These powders are then mixed before passed th...
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Suggestion: Next
...this process, external heat is supplied.Next stage is that these mixtures are grinne...
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Suggestion: These
... mixtures are grinned to produce cement.These cement is packed with bags and transpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19216649803 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640522875817 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8364339744 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222923299195 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110837549903 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779688096603 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148181802631 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071884222636 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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