Modern wedding celebrations are becoming more expensive and spacious than previous generations. In my opinion this is happening due to economic disponibilities and this is creating much concern about expenditures
Firstly, it is believed that rise of standards is the main reason. As a result, more countries have a handle on a wedding budgets. Secondly, society has managed to create unrealistic expectations when it comes to wedding. Another reason is that, weddings come with social pressures that might influence to spend. One clear example, is competition between couples among friend circles. Last but not the least, couple feel the pressure from families and are obliged to throw a lavish wedding.
On the other hand, couples that think their wedding should not be fancy actually spend more than they have planned. Consequently, every little part of the wedding is going to cost money. Starting from the venue, to the cameraman and so on. For this reason, many couples get into debt just to pay for their wedding. According to statistics one-quarter of couples are prepared to go into debt for their weddings which they might later regret. In reality, couple doesn't need to dig this deep for a decent wedding experience and the money saved can be put to better use. For instance, the saved amount can be used for a down payment of your dream house or saving for children college in the near future.
To encapsulate, nowadays people have more expandable income to spend due to higher standards in some countries but in most cases this doesn't come with no cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03816793893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63255871033 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0885331126 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165107593977 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561591529769 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557413463308 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105700532513 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472085883039 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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