The bar chart illustrates the proportions of men and women from six different age groups in Australia who practised physical activities on a regular basis in the year 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the young men were most active of all other age groups of men while women of age group (45 to 54) practised more physical activities. The older women showed least interest in physical exercises as opposed to men of the age group (35 to 44). There was a least difference between the percentage of men and women who belonged to age group of 65 and over. Men were more in number as compared to women only in the lower age category whereas for the remaining age groups ,women outnumbered men in practising physical exercises.
In detail,52.8 % of teenager men as opposed to 47.7 % of teenager women exercised regularly in 2010. With regards to the age category (65+ and over),only 47.1% of older women were physically active whereas men were 0.1% less in percentage.
In the age category(25 to 34), the proportions of men and women who exercised daily were 42.2% and 48.9 % respectively. There were very few men(just 39.5%) under (35 to 44) who showed interested in physical exercise while women far exceeded men of this age group by 13% .Under the age group 45-54,women's percentage was very high(at about 53.3%) making them most active women age group in Australia. But the percentage of men still stood low at 45.1% .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79098360656 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65416629571 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5551942796 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507287099118 0.215688989381 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24458941503 0.103423049105 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10522402473 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360324381379 0.15604864568 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993091267906 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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