Many students take part-time jobs while studying at university. Is this a bad or good idea?
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon for high school or university students to find some part-time jobs. But some people doubt it. Whether students should do part-time jobs or concentrate on their studies. I agree that doing a part-time job is helpful for students as it helps them to widen their horizons and also help them to deal with problems in their life. Also, they get to know how to value things.
Firstly, while doing a part-time job students get to know what is happening in their societies. When they work they meet different peoples and learn new things every day which is not possible in a school that is only limited to certain subjects.
Secondly, juveniles that go only to school don't face real-time problems and would not able to develop the quality of how to deal with problems. However, students who work face difficulties almost every day and they develop experiences of how to deal with them.
Finally, children who work get to know the importance of money in their early life. Also, they realize how their parents are working hard to give them a good lifestyle. As a result, they value things and people around them. It is proven that children who work during studying value things such as food and clothes more than children who do not work.
To sum up, I would say that it is very important for students to work while studying as it would help them to grow mentally and would help them to know about society too.
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- Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
- Many students take part time jobs while studying at university Is this a bad or good idea 86
- Many students take part time jobs while studying at university Is this a bad or good idea 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37435275821 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526530612245 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.311565043 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167173764472 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699439277206 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743462016652 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639602044273 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730520572106 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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