Grandparents cannot give advice to their grandchildren because the world now is different from the way it was 50 years ago
Grandparents play an indispensable role in their grandchildren’s lives. Although my point of view can be biased because I had a great bond with my grandparents, I do not agree with the statement of grandparents cannot give advice to their grandchildren because the world has changed in the past five decades. They have a range of experiences that are not related to eras. Eternal advice was given by my grandparents like keeping the strong with my relatives and that I should save money for the future. In the following paragraphs, I will substantiate my point of view.
Firstly, living longer than their grandchildren, grandparents have gone through a lot of experiences. Those experiences have given them wider knowledge about life conflicts and how to solve them. Which makes them the best advisors for their grandchildren no matter what decade they are. For instance, I have always considered my grandparents as mentors who never skimped on giving me advice. I remember that my grandmother once advised me never to break the bond with my family and to keep a good relationship with them, as they would stand by my side for the rest of my life. That timeless and valuable advice was the best guide for me throughout my life.
The second precious and enduring advice that had given by my grandparents was to always save money because nobody could predict the future. That advice helped me when my relative had undergone open-heart surgery and they didn’t have enough money. I had saved money in my bank account which I immediately gave them to the hospital and paid off the surgery cost. If I didn’t follow my grandparent’s advice, something bad would have happened to my relative.
In conclusion, no matter which decade we live in, grandparents’ advice is always valuable. Like when they advised me not to overspend my money and to keep some for the future. Besides, keeping strong relationships with my relatives. This advice can live forever for the next generations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12548997863 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.579328755 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160754771463 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606594013494 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642167634775 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11367057011 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645005559062 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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