write a letter to organizer of annual festival who is going organize in your place. Give feedback for last year, mention what you can do and ask some questions about the festival.
Dear Mr. Shah,
I am writing in regards to annual celebration that you are organizing this year. Since I was a part of organizing committee last year, I would like to offer some feedback that would aid your planning this year.
Last year, the carnival was proposed in December, and it was in open party plot at city road. Although the celebration went excellent, people had little inconvenience due to bitter weather and chilling cold. Apparently, if the event being placed in resort, people would not have this discomfort. This year again the carnival is thought to be in December; thus, it is better to have these things taken into consideration.
If you are looking for a resort, I can help you with the top resorts in the city at the reasonable rates. Having past experience of planning several events with them, I can assure you of their service and arrangements. Therefore, let me know in case you need any assistance in this matter.
Finally, I am curious to know about the events that are going to take place. Everyone is super excited to know about the festival theme. It would be appreciated if you could advertise certain events and theme, so that we could get our dress well-in-advance to enjoy the fun,
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Mr. Shah, I am writing in regards to annual celebration that you are organiz...
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Line 13, column 114, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...he city at the reasonable rates. Having past experience of planning several events with them, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86160714286 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67938975595 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620535714286 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2588895711 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7692307692 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232866911217 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768055632318 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618449924928 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115302769317 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887050522734 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.