Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several davs
— say you are sorry
— explain the situation with transportation
— give suggestions of how you intend to fix it.
Dear Mr. Lee,
I am really sorry that I have been running late to office by 20-30 minutes on a regular basis. I sincerely apolozise my irregularity, however I have been compensating the due time in the evening and on weekends.
I stay 20 Km far from the workplace and the route usually has got 4 checkposts. The traffic at these checkposts is quite variable and difficult to predict. there are days when there is no traffic and days when the there are vechicles waiting for clearance in 4-6 kilometer stretch. Keeping in mind the whole situation, I always start an hour ahead. however, due to the unpredictability I run late to office on some days.
I am feeling quite embarrassed on this issue and am in a plan to shift my apartment next month, as it is not ready immediately for occupancy. Also, it would be a humble gesture form your side, if you can consider my first swipe-in and last swipe-out to count my total number of working hours, as you know my sincerity and commitment towards my project and workplace.
Kindly donot consider my situation as negligence towards work and provide me some time to fix it.
Kind regards,
Pavani.Parupudi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Lee, I am really sorry that I have been running la...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... by 20-30 minutes on a regular basis. I sincerely apolozise my irregularity, however I have been co...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue time in the evening and on weekends. I stay 20 Km far from the workplace and ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me in the evening and on weekends. I stay 20 Km far from the workplace and t...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...uite variable and difficult to predict. there are days when there is no traffic and d...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ituation, I always start an hour ahead. however, due to the unpredictability I run late...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...ncy. Also, it would be a humble gesture form your side, if you can consider my first...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... swipe-in and last swipe-out to count my total number of working hours, as you kn...
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Line 17, column 8, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Parupudi
...ime to fix it. Kind regards, Pavani.Parupudi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74384236453 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85576661266 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6327101432 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12182958251 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325648143028 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370634999551 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680679749701 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349228565601 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.