Write a letter to manager in the airport to appreciate an employee for their help.
-What was the problem ?
-How did he help ?
-What you want the manager to do ?
Dear Sir,
My name is Bharat Prajapati, dweller of Gujarat. Me and my family went to Bombay recently for a vacation and returned yesterday. I am writing this letter to thank you and appreciate work one of your employee Mr. Suraj Patel, who helped us with a problem that we faced at the airport.
Yesterday, me and my family returned at Ahmedabad airport. As we were going to carousel to collect luggage and suddenly my daughter slipped from escalator. Fortunately she does not get major injury, only minor scratches on her leg and elbow. At the same time your officer Mr. Suraj Patel was going from there and he saw that my daughter was crying so he asked us about this and said what was happened. So immediately he arranged the first aid and my daughter gets some relaxed from pain. Moreover, after some time my wife recognize that she lost her hand bag. In that purse our passport and other important documents was inside. We searched here and there but did not found. Luckily that officer was with us and suggested to look at "Lost and Found" department and we went there and found the purse. We feel relaxed after getting purse.
Mr. Suraj Patel personally take care of my daughter like she is his daughter. Moreover he also helped us in getting purse. He is kind and helpful in nature and doing his job very politely. Please say thank you on behalf of us. Furthermore, i heard that you have an award for best employee of the month. I would like to suggest his name for this award. As a result he will get motivation to do better and better.
I hope that you will consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
Bharat Prajapati.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...f my daughter like she is his daughter. Moreover he also helped us in getting purse. He ...
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Line 13, column 241, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...thank you on behalf of us. Furthermore, i heard that you have an award for best e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 5.05154639175 376% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67006802721 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45954824595 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5156869355 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4090909091 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199247995503 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519046414115 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598784228642 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120490348126 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597389942046 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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