The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2000 and for 2040.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2000 and for 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

overall, what stands out from the charts is that while the majority of the population was for the 0-13 age group in Oman, it was 14-59 for Spain. Moreover, the percentages are predicted to be different in 2040, and both countries will have the same age group which is 14-59 as the largest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
overall, what stands out from the charts is tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 237.0 965.302439024 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 53.0 196.424390244 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47169811321 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.69816787641 3.73543355544 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35206672336 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 106.607317073 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754716981132 0.547539520022 138% => OK
syllable_count: 67.5 283.868780488 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 1.0 43.030603864 2% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157939256436 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116473231889 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625437949928 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157939256436 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 9.0 40.7170731707 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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