A good education prompts a person's asserts, personality and sometimes success also. Due to the advancement in technology and in Science, education level is culminated day by day. Hindi is our mother tongue, but yet English is an international language. Education system in India is getting downgraded day by day. Howsoever, millions of people every year getting fascinated/attracted to move to English speaking countries such as Australia, Britain, Germany or America, in order to do their graduation.
Education system in other developed countries is pinnacling and even they are providing better scholarships and benefits to international students. As in present time, every person wants to make a good image and personality at national or international level, and for that purpose he/she must be flourished in English language.
Developed countries have better education worldwide and Germany is a one of the finest example. Germany is giving almost free education to both local and international students. Except Germany there are also other countries like Canada, UK and Sweden, whose education system is far more better than developing countries.
As English is a common language worldwide, so mostly people wants to learn English because firstly, it is popular and secondly, for doing study in other countries, one must have to show there fluency and expertise in English. Due to these reasons, the craze of English language is snowballing among the youth. Apart from it, as English is a mandatory subject in the Education system, in most of the countries, because of that purpose it has already become an important international language.
It is well said by the other people also, that a person's speaking style, his behavior all reflects his personality and that is directly attached to his/her education system. To make a good profile, to grab a good job, to develop and to grow more, and to compete with competitors at national or international level, one person would definitely need to learn English language.
- WRITING TASK 1The charts show what the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes 73
- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. 73
- the advantages and disadvantages of the shopping in supermarkets 69
- Some people think it s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
- Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
A good education prompts a persons asserts, personality and sometimes succ...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...erts, personality and sometimes success also. Due to the advancement in technology a...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
... international students. Except Germany there are also other countries like Canada, UK and Sweden, w...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...d Sweden, whose education system is far more better than developing countries. As Englis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 5.05154639175 376% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 937.175257732 183% => OK
No of words: 322.0 206.0 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33229813665 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03677961006 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 290.88556701 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.985280975 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278881278033 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919952275262 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111919443974 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149598318784 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906925268454 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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