You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter
• give details about the concert
• describe how you won the tickets
• explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Tom,
How are you? I hope everyone is doing great.I'm writing to invite you musical performance which is going to be start next week.
Firstly, concert is going to happen at M G road, which is near to your living place. you will be more excited about event,because your favorite M Jackson is coming and giving 5 hours live show which starts from 5 to 10 PM on 24th August.Furthermore, there is a special and unique performance with popular singers.I think this is going to be a best show ever after.
I want to share with you how I got these tickets and you will be surprised. As you know that, I'm very fond of latest mobile phones, I had visited City Shopping Center and there was a offer that who ever purchased more than 1000 dollars, you will be getting two tickets for concert if your name comes up in lottery.
In our circle, you are most interested about concert, so it will be great fun with you going to live concert.
Best wishes
Marcc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Im
...are you? I hope everyone is doing great.Im writing to invite you musical performan...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...are you? I hope everyone is doing great.Im writing to invite you musical performan...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ad, which is near to your living place. you will be more excited about event,becaus...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ce. you will be more excited about event,because your favorite M Jackson is coming and g...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng 5 hours live show which starts from 5 to 10 PM on 24th August.Furthermore, the...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... starts from 5 to 10 PM on 24th August.Furthermore, there is a special and unique performa...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...unique performance with popular singers.I think this is going to be a best show e...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...lar singers.I think this is going to be a best show ever after. I want to sh...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ou will be surprised. As you know that, Im very fond of latest mobile phones, I ha...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...rprised. As you know that, Im very fond of latest mobile phones, I had visited City Shopp...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ited City Shopping Center and there was a offer that who ever purchased more than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49152542373 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51510804089 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3115932367 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346360737161 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163286438156 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816932356603 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229378119377 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442272535096 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.