Truth is worth to preserve. Telling the truth is one of the targets we use to choose a friend, a partner or a person to do things with us. It is very simple, but sometimes, finding a person who is telling the truth to you is very difficult. To me, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship if you want to get closer to that relationship.
First of all, the truth builds a bond between people. If you like somebody and you want to make friends with them, you have to tell the truth because that person will think that you are honest and truly want to be friends with them. They will want to be friends with you too. Otherwise, if you always tell lies to your friends, will they want to be friends with you? Of course, never. Who wants to make a friend with a liar?
Besides, telling the truth helps you and your friends to find mutual respect and trust. If your best friend lied to you once, you will forgive them because you are best friends and you think that was just a joke, but if your friend says that a few more times, you will gradually lose faith in this friend and you will think that it was deliberately teasing and not thinking about your feelings. You will stop playing with that friend immediately. Another example is that your friend borrow you some money to do something and they don't say the reason why they borrow you. The reason might be for something good but they don't say it to you for some reasons. But you don't think so. You might think that "after this friend borrowed my money, he will not repay me" and of course, you will not lend that money to him. If the situation get worse like if you two are best friend, you will think that this friend doesn't trust you, doesn't consider yourself a good friend. Between you and that friend will create a misunderstanding that separates your friendship. Only when the other friend tells the truth do both of you get rid of that misunderstanding.
Through the two examples above, you have certainly seen the importance of telling the truth and hope that you will tell the truth in every situation so that everyone can understand and trust each other.
- In many countries, there is no access to education for children in remote villages/communities. Some people believe that the best solution is to provide teachers and schools. Others think computer and internet connection is better selection. Discuss both 78
- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. however, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss usa both views and give your own opinion. 56
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people 56
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, of course, first of all, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 3.15609756098 602% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 5.60731707317 1338% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 965.302439024 183% => OK
No of words: 398.0 196.424390244 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44221105528 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3411261596 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424623115578 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.4623603799 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1904761905 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 3.70975609756 458% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143918470327 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748827976079 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123082045697 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170147239137 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143085515036 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.