You had an appointment to meet you friend but you were not able to make it and you could not inform him. Write a letter
- Apologize for not coming
- Explain the reason why you could not be there
- Tell him how you tried contacting
- Request another meeting
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I regret to inform you that we did not meet together last Saturday just because of some unavoidable circumstances. Allow me to elaborate this matter.
I feel extremely sorry to let you know that I was unable to visit at meeting place. I had an emergency before on that such day. I received a phone call from my cousin last Friday informed me that my maternal uncle got serious injury in an accident. He has been hospitalized and soon to be operated. Thus, I urgently visited to the hospital with my father. As a result, I could not attend the meeting with you on that day.
However, I tried to contact you through the mobile phone but unluckily my call was disconnected due to network problem. Additionally, I would greatly appreciate if u could arrange a new meeting after couple of weeks.
Given the Situation, I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
With lots of Love,
James Smith.
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did not meet together last Saturday
did not meet together on last Saturday
unable to visit at meeting place
unable to visit at the meeting place
I received a phone call from my cousin last Friday informed me
I received a phone call from my cousin who informed me
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 754 1000
No. of Different Words: 119 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.409 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.522 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.216 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.669 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4