Dear Sir or Madam,
I am from V.K Enterprises and writing to you in response to the advertisement given by your company in the newspaper for the refurbishment of school buildings.
I am interested to take up this work assignment, so I would like to visit your site this Saturday and discuss the requirements with you. If things go well, my team will be ready to start the work from next Monday i.e. 03rd Feb.
My team has a wide experience in the renovation of buildings in the past.Our company’s catalogues with the images of our recent work can be referred to get the insights of our previous work. Recently, we have finished similar work assignment for St.Josephs school in Model Town, and the school management had greatly appreciated our innovative designs and our commitment towards work.
Also, I would like to tell you that my team comprises of dedicated young professionals, who apply themselves in the work, and ready to go extra mile to give our clients world class experience. I am hoping that you will give us a chance to serve you.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Neha
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am from V.K Enterprises and writing to you in respo...
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...the work from next Monday i.e. 03rd Feb. My team has a wide experience in the ren...
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...finished similar work assignment for St.Josephs school in Model Town, and the school ma...
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of
..., I would like to tell you that my team comprises of dedicated young professionals, who appl...
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...ive response. Yours faithfully, Neha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90155440415 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91014642014 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0960247944 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167342868095 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744959209606 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748701114096 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105672760293 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778477205155 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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