The graph reveals the information about the passengers' activity in Toronto Metro System throughout the weekdays in july 2007. The data has been calibrated in thousands.
At the first glance, it is quite apparent that the number of commuters at 6 A.M, 100,000 , soared tremendously reaching a peak of 400,000 at 8 A.M . Not after much time, it dramatically plunged to approximately 200,000 at 10 A.M. Later on, it rose gradually till 12 P.M to reach about 300,000 where it flattened out till 2.AM.
Going further, it tumbled sharply where it bottomed out to 100,000 at 4 P.M before skyrocketing t...
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