Dear John,
I am writing this letter in connection with my start day of working in your company because I have to back home to see my uncle who is having a serious disease, I am not able to start my work on November 15.
I am so glad I received the job offer which is the company that I have been dreaming about it since I graduated. The tough call from my hometown I got was made me depressed a lot. It is hard to believe my uncle is having such ill that I never know before so I told my parents I will go with on choice.
I understand the job is created this month and need some per-work to do so I am going to take a laptop with me, some of the job task you could send it to me and explain it in detail over email. I will come back immediately when my uncle is getting better.
Thank you for your understanding and I hope I could join the company as soon as I can.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...so I am going to take a laptop with me, some of the job task you could send it to me and ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.93989071038 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24344726486 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9448004141 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 4.34317383033 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156612523891 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587201245632 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621723215082 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107604366028 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562404166644 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.87 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.