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The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The given charts compare the different way of behavior with hazardous waste and how many wastes produce five types of industries in three countries in 2000
overall, The USA buried its hazardous industrial wastes in landfills more than disposal and recycled them while in Malaysia, and England's most popular way was disposal waste. The USA was the biggest waste producer in 2000, with a higher amount of waste in the Plastic Bag industry. Besides, Malaysia and the U.K. have the highest amount of waste products as same as the USA in the Plastic bag industry.
Regarding the pie chart, half of the exposed waste in America buried in a landfill while in the U.K. and Malaysia, only 15% and 30% of their waste buried in a landfill. 45% of waste in the U.K. and Malaysia was the disposal of waste. Meanwhile, 20% of waste in America was disposal.
The highest rate of industrial loss in America, the U.K., and Malaysia were the industrial plastic bag with 60mt, 50mt, and 32 mt, respectively. In 2000, the lowest number in the U.K. (7mt) and America (14) was in Electronic waste while in Malaysia produce clinical waste was lowest at 9%. the second-highest amount of waste in America was industrial chemical at 50mt in 2000 while in the U.K., and Malaysia dangerous waste in industrial chemical was 20mt and 10 mt respectively.
- Some people say that government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadium they should focus on medical care and education To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some children have a natural ability to grasp foreign languages and for that reason it should not be a mandatory subject in the academic curriculum Do you agree or Disagree 78
- Some children have a natural ability to grasp foreign languages and for that reason it should not be a mandatory subject in the academic curriculum Do you agree or Disagree 89
- The bar chart below show the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season 67
- the bar chart below shows the number of people visiting two different cites by seasonsSummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83406113537 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59349680222 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43231441048 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8427094886 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903152436567 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478794565599 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310477841435 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739257585468 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030427265733 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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