In today's world, advertising has numerous impacts on people's lifestyles. Whilst, I believe this industry has some effect on people's desire, I presume that this may not the only reason that is affected by people’s choices.
On the one hand, the power of advertising is undeniable. This power will result in people's inclination and desire for buying options. When people see some products everywhere and every time they look, contributing to their choices. Due to the fact, people use the same products, they are loose individuals' personalities. In addition, when people bias to buy well-known products and purchase for them, resulting in eliminate smaller companies from the industry. As a result of the eliminating company, people have the smallest areas for choosing the goods, so they lost their different individuals and look the same.
On the other hand, advertising is not the only factor that peoples lost their different desire. For instance, junior citizen tends to obey the celebrity and public figure, causing choose the same products to reassemble their peers. Youngsters copy everything from their popular celebrity, even their hairstyle or wear perfume. In addition, another factor, that is impacted by people have the same lifestyle, is society’s attitude. For example, in Iran, most of the women use the black color for their clothes which is some kind of norm those people obey that.
In conclusion, it is my conviction that advertising has a great impact on people's taste. However, I believe that it is not the only reason people have the same lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17768595041 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78056190113 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7454990899 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178428429532 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739626188489 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347086744981 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114852228189 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303808807001 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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