young adults plan organize
Nowadays life demands to answer to a vaste range of demands. Personally, I think that it is a valuable characteristic to young adults be able to delimit a clear and well-structured plan. I believe that there are at least 2 main reasons to argue it: first, the economical desestability we are living in and, second the new uses of technology and social networks.
First of all, socio-economic dynamics has change dramatically in the last 20 years. Now adults are facing shorter contracts, more competence and globalization. If as a young adult you are not prepared to save money, trace major and minor goals, and have a path to follow, probably you will find yourself with troubles that could exceed you. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. As a universitary teacher, I received money just 9 month of the years. In the other months I must cover my personal neccesities with my savings, so being organized is crucial for surviving. Moreover, as colleges are looking for their own profits, they are paying fewer compared with the academic preparation the worker has. For example, a friend of mine, atlhough he has a doctoral degree, it has been impossible to increse his incomes in order to feed his family.
Secondly, the uses of new techological networks allows a huge amount of information and constantly demands decreasing time for spare or personal reflection. In other words, people are all day online solving short-term demands. If they don't get aware of it, probably time would pass faster and their goals with be at a second place. An illustrative case is people that are getting sick or divorced because they have not time for relaxing activities or family concerns. My father, for instance, used to had an agenda with his goals, plans, and duties. Instead, my sister is getting very sick because she needs to fulfill a lot of demands and she had not the ability to organize her schedule.
In conclusion, I definitely support the need for plan and organization in order to deal with todays' everyday life. Due to economical changes and the presence of technology, organization and planning its a perfect strategic to face modern times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: months
...sitary teacher, I received money just 9 month of the years. In the other months I mus...
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Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94808743169 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88640092173 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0448556434 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195622809402 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501741392095 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788519228123 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129271200068 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744487038198 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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