Life is full of duality, nothing exists without its polar counterpart. In this context migration of rural students are not an exception. Though it has made human life comfortable, it entails several drawbacks. I strongly believe that the advantages and disadvantages of migrating to the city area for work or higher studies have equally significant weight; one cannot outweigh the other. This essay will also discuss the cause associated with this development.
To begin with, there are several causes of this type of migration. The first and foremost aspect to point out in this context is that urban areas have more work-related facilities compared with villages. Nowadays, most of the companies have their offices in urban areas, due to this people have more job options in these areas. Apart from this, they have the opportunity to earn a handsome salary. The second point in this regard is that most of the universities and colleges are located in the cities and these universities attract ambitious students who want to earn higher degrees. For instance, in India, many people, who have limited options in villages, relocated near the city to complete their education.
There are irrefutable benefits of leaving home from rural areas and transfer to the city areas to grab more work or study-related opportunities. Firstly, urban have more infrastructure-related facilities compared with villages, which might be helpful to enhance living standard of society. To illustrate, city areas have high-standard medical facilities, which increase the life expectancy of the country's people. Secondly, due to the migration of rural people, the remarkable improvement would be noted in the number of graduate students, which ultimately increases the country's education level.
However, a few of many disadvantages can be highlighted. The first of these would be the exponential population growth in cities, which spoil the quality of life. To elaborate, in cities areas, the cost of infrastructure facility would be high due to its over demand and in this condition, people have to make compromises with their lifestyles. Secondly, this migration leaves rural areas abandoned and demotes such professions like farming.
To conclude, opportunities related to work and higher education are the main reasons for this migration. This type of migration have merits and demerits, which have equally significant weight; one cannot overweigh other.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve their offices in urban areas, due to this people have more job options in these a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00682971429 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9340806526 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276367698394 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820210577316 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749027519536 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154819274474 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400194091749 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve their offices in urban areas, due to this people have more job options in these a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00682971429 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9340806526 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276367698394 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820210577316 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749027519536 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154819274474 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400194091749 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.