Education is more difficult than it used to be
education is an important concept in our life. learning is not an easy pathway to continue on it, However i believe education is more difficult for multiple reason. which, i will explore in my essay.
First of all, learning new material is hard in whole life, not a matter if it is simple thing or hard. nowadays with invention revolution and the world progress in all discipline. The learning tools become harder to utilize because it depends more on technology rather than person. In the past, people were depending on simple equipments to study like:paper and pencil. Even though they were success in their live.
moreover using computer now and websites for education added more difficulties on people who did not use technology before. Beside that human can not work nowadays without an education degree since job is very competitive . For instance, I were studying in university of pharmacy. The instructor required three references from me to do my research. which cost me a lot of money and time. Add to that i left my part time job. because i need training about hoe to use scholar search engine.
Secondly, education is more demanding. the schools and universities require working hard from students to get their degree like : doing research, utilizing websites , tablets and computers to finish homework.
For example, about ten years ago, my father was studying in college of engineering. he was spending 3 hours in college and he used to finish his homework within on hour maximum. my father didn't need more than paper and pen to complete his assignments. In contrast, I could not start my homework without changing my tabulate and paying my internet bill to use the wi-fi.
Finally, studying and education are deserve all our time and effort to get through it. Some people may find education is easier now. they can access all available resources in one click.
I agree, it is harder to accomplish and follow the new technique in education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01212121212 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66429499816 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9932356704 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.16 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242996341852 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586004302706 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790874815913 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985817485419 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581511035449 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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