Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Some people believe that success can be considered the perfect indicator for intelligence. On the other hand, others assume that there are various aspects, rather than success, should be put into consideration when assessing intelligence. I totally agree with the opinion that success in life be a monitor for intelligence in life. This will be further explained in this essay before drawing a logical conclusion.
First of all, I think intelligence, which include es different types such as IQ standard, emotional, social and general , gives people a great opportunity to achieve their goals successfully. Even if someone has faced some failures in certain stages of their lives, they would be capable of overcoming these unpleasant situations by using their intelligence to think rationally and cope efficiently with these situations. For example, a lot of famous scientists have reached their ambitious aims through hard consistent work and the combination of intelligences they have.
Secondly, intelligence keeps people motivated and therefore leads to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between success, motivation and intelligence. Intelligent People need to be motivated to bring out their best. For instance, Bill Gates was intelligent to powerfully motivate his staff to get the best of them and to achieve his ambitious goals.
In conclusion, great accomplishments are obvious results of different types of intelligence. People can successfully achieve their goals if they value their capabilities and benefit from motivating others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58577405858 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13567897574 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652719665272 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5380165268 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31233005417 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109292253911 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620241244892 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173941311845 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802282265617 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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