A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
<span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">Dear John,
Hope you are doing great.
I am so glad receiving the letter which about you interested in finding a job in new Zealand. I would like to let you know the job vacancy that I found yesterday.
I saw a noticeboard near the entrance of</span> <span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">local supermarket PAK, which is they are hiring a supply chain manager</span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">. The duty of the job is managing the warehouse in headquarter and internal and external communication with stakeholders. Apart from that, lead the </span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">warehouse</span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;"> team.
When I studied in Australia, I do remember you told me you have more than five years </span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">warehouse</span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;"> managing experiences and your major in university is supply chain so I think this is perfect one for you.
I asked the contact information from </span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">supermarket</span><span style="text-size-adjust: auto;">, they told me just send your CV and cover letter to hr@pak.co.nz directly. they will contact you soon if you are in the candidate lists.
I believe you will get the job based on your ample experiences and I hope to see you soon.
Good luck.
Kind regards,
Joe</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... job vacancy that I found yesterday. I saw a noticeboard near the entrance of<...> ^
Line 11, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... cover letter to hr@pak.co.nz directly. they will contact you soon if you are in the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.76923076923 4.54256449028 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.9256101728 2.54303337028 272% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3270187523 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150842971682 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095210663153 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091403834034 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134475665832 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959796919401 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 8.37731958763 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 70.7449484536 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.69 8.71597938144 249% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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