Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
today in this modern era life of people became so easy only because of technology .As technology flourish by leaps and bounds makes whole world same .some masses think that nowadays we have huge options . I am totally agree with the statement and i will justify this statement in upcoming paragraph
First and foremost,today because of technology life because so calm . Those were the days when we have to put large effort inorder to complete a small work but in this contemporary world that same work get done with in seconds. Moreover, in past it took so much time to cover a very small distance, but nowadays due to different means of transport it become so easy .
Just because of transport , communication and mechines today have lots of options . Firstly if i talk about education ,in past only high class people can study or options in front of them is very less but today they have large options .secondly , career opportunities get intensity nowadays people have thousands of jobs in front of them if they are not interested in doing job then they can setup their own business even because of transportation systems person can move from one country to another in search of employment .
In netshell , i think that only because of technology it became possible that we get huge options in front of us but still there are huge who are uneducated and unemployment so getting benifit out of these options is dependent on us .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65197265905 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.679569798 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.285714286 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2857142857 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952678622694 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431220747602 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294103858377 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567635128385 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315647244722 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.