life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
There is no doubt that today’s life is much easier and convenient that past. By entering and blooming technology, lifestyle has improved remarkably. At present, people have access to many resources better than before, and they can be in touch easier than before.
First of all, internet brings huge changes to people’s life, for one thing, they can communicate to each other easier than before. Instead of being face to face, this fact could be very effective on people life. As a result, in contrast than before, they don’t need to spend long distance and time to see each other and talk to each other. Technology can handle all these possibilities for them hopefully. For another, transferring money online for business stuff provide very valuable facilities for all business men all over the world. Before they used to go to banks and transfer huge amount of money, so, these days no need for such functions.
Second, the important of transportation. Years back, people used to take long distance to see their families and friends, but as technology developed, they had to only spend few hours to get an airplane and reach to their destination. As a result, they waste less time and they don’t get that much tired as before to see their relatives and friends. For example, my grand parents always used to spend 1 days to reach to our city for visiting us, and because they had painful legs so they were survived to handle these trip. Even though, they were very delighted to see us ,but it was very difficult to bear the difficulty of trip.
Last but not least, urban arrangement these days, people have electricity and plumbing, while long time back, people hadn’t have these much of facilities, for example, my grandfather used to go to river close to village and taake water, in contrast, these days people are much happy that, they don’t need to take a risk of many dangers for having water and also happy for electricity rather than using candles.
To sum up, life is getting easier day by day because of many facilities that science and technology brought for us. People reach their needs faster than before and most effective than those old days.
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- TPO 39 Integrated Writing Task 11
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When teachers assign projects on which students must work together the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects 66
- o you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, first of all, for one thing, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81550802139 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45402258129 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53743315508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8223306701 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.941176471 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105598710121 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441441429425 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521865918424 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795215162142 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559265907193 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.