Nowadays, many people access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children playing computer games.
what are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects.
It is a fact that in today's world, millions of people get access to computers widely because which are known as user-friendly devices. Also, a dramatic number of youngsters today are enraptured with computer games. This essay will show off some drawbacks when playing games too much and propose several viable solutions to tackle this issue.
One of the foremost problems which will happen if children play game too much is poor study. Specifically, nowadays it can be seen in some developing countries that there are many students dedicating their time to enjoy games. As a result, this will have knock-on effects on their academic excellence. In addition to this, living in a sedentary way is another problem which games engender to our generation. Clearly, they will have a tendency to be swamped with games all day rather than doing outdoors activities like playing sports for example. Consequently, this will affect directly to not only their lifestyle but also their standards of health. In other words, game addiction frequently make their study quality worsen and also force them to have a sedentary lifestyle.
To matter this, parents need to keep an eye on their own children, pay attention to their actions and also supervise them strictly in order to minimize the bad effects of games on their generation. Moreover, it is significantly necessary that local governments should co-operate with schools with a view to organizing some outdoors and extracurricular activities for children to participate in. This will help children do away with games.
To conclude, game addiction have several detrimental effects on not only children's study quality but also their standards of life. However, there are also some certain solutions to curtail this by parents and local government as well as school actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sedentary way" with adverb for "sedentary"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...excellence. In addition to this, living in a sedentary way is another problem which games engender...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2252559727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75183546011 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6394864862 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202358518474 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687155079519 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464255045933 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12292020555 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540199640951 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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