You have seen an advertisement from in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child
Write a letter to the parents . In the letter
1) Explain why you like the job
2) Give details why you would be a suitable person to employ
3) say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your classified published in the Telegraph on 9th of February 2020 for a live in nanny for six months.
I have recently moved to Sydney to take a one year course in culinary skills and seeking a place to live and work part time.
While I was working in Italy as an assistant cook for the last few years, my aspiration to get an international exposure and expand my knowledge of cultures brought me to Australia.
Besides cooking, I also like spending time with children, as I have a niece and a nephew of the same age giving me good experience and confidence of getting along with & taking care of your six year old child.
I believe safety, hygiene and good nutrition would be of utmost importance and I could be a good short term addition to your family.
I love fishing and attend wine tastings in the region during my free time to make most of my stay here.
I am looking forward to a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Leonardo Da Vinci.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your classif...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ls and seeking a place to live and work part time. While I was working in Italy as an a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taking care of your six year old child. I believe safety, hygiene and good nutri...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ee time to make most of my stay here. I am looking forward to a positive respon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive response. Yours faithfully, Leonardo Da Vinci.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50273224044 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57741664454 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4485385108 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169825209363 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059056443461 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549699763723 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069431703924 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056391884874 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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