You are member of organisation which meets regularly at particular restaurant.the most recent meal you ordered was not satifactory.Write letter to manager
explain why you are writing,describe what went wrong with meal and service,suggest what manager should do to ensure that you and your group returns
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the meal and service offered recently on my last visit to your well- known restaurant at ''Thai Chi'', which I had visited along with my colleagues.I have so far been a devoted customer, but the incident on 17th March, added to my agony.
Let me explain you the scenerio in brief.I very often visit along with the members of my oraganisation to have lunch due to best food and environment of your restaurant.But to my surprise on our last visit the food we ordered was not up to the mark.We had ordered steak ,soup and potato fries.Firstly, we were shocked to discover that steak was not well cooked and soup was watery and the fries were not cooked as well.Secondly,when we asked the waiter to replace the items, he was very arrogant and stubborn in his behaviour.Lastly,we were made to wait for long time for the meal to be served.
Overall,the meals and service both were disgraceful.I was quite embarrassed in front of my colleagues whom I had recommended your restaurant.However.we didn't even receive any apology from your staff out there.
As a result,I would like to suggest to have proper supervision and better management to achieve success and to maintain your restaurant's reputation intact.In order to do so, you need to train your staff the best hospitality and check the food before being served,Also,I am expecting you to offer me and my group a complimentary lunch voucher for next visit,In this way, you can compensate for the loss of your restaurant's reputation.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Riz
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...from you soon. Yours faithfully, Riz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, well, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91636363636 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17010832258 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.029808131 49.4020404114 415% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.333333333 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8333333333 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192163198252 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860398174392 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467246077122 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10390738707 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292077304686 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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