The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter are placing face to face contact in this country. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages.
<p class="MsoNormal" align="justify" style="text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-bidi-font-family:'Times New Roman';">It cannot be denied that the Internet has revolutionized our lives. Many adopt that using social network such as Facebook, Twitter has gradually changed the way people connect. In spite of having some drawbacks in accessing internet community, I do believe that its benefits still outweigh its disadvantages. </span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-bidi-font-family:'Times New Roman';"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="justify" style="text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;"><span style="font-family: Calibri; letter-spacing: 0px;">To begin with, there are several reasons why people increasingly tend to use social media than that before. Firstly, people can solve their works effectively and efficiently thanks to the rapid growth of digital age. In fact, by clicking the button, everything is shown in front of their eye. It means they do need to waste a lot of time to deal with problems. For example, by virtue of prominent of social network as Skype, business meetings can be arranged easily since they do not spend time for transportation. This helps them save the travel cost but still make sure the flow of their work. In addition, it seems convenient for students who live far way from home can contact with their family. They can do these calls free of charge by making use of the useful function of Facebook to conserve or chat with their loved ones. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="justify" style="text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;"><span style="font-family: Calibri; letter-spacing: 0px;">Of course, social media is never without drawbacks. One main reason is the lack of interaction among people. Sometimes, it leads to misunderstanding information and this might create an immense distance in communication as they only connect via the Internet. Nevertheless, social platform is a positive factor for the progress of the country. Along with the development of mass media, everything would be more simple for people if they want to know something. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="justify" style="text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-bidi-font-family:'Times New Roman';"><o:p> </o:p></span><span style="letter-spacing: 0px; font-family: Calibri;">In conclusion, based on mentioned reason above, social media has become an indisputable part in people’s lives. In fact, people of 21</span><sup style="letter-spacing: 0px;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-bidi-font-family:'Times New Roman';vertical-align:super;">st</span></sup><span style="letter-spacing: 0px; font-family: Calibri;"> century get used to using social media to access news content as this brings a great deal of merit for them. </span></p>
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| 2020-02-12 | thuylinhpham0812 | 89 | view |
- The users of social media such as Facebook Twitter are placing face to face contact in this country Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages 89
- In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Inte 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2980.0 1615.20841683 184% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 8.32402234637 5.12529762239 162% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.206717973 2.80592935109 435% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 826.2 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 137.944522755 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.555555556 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578500158907 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373260499328 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379001485609 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438863702059 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311603388579 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.03 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.0 11.3001002004 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 30.98 12.4159519038 250% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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