Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, money is one of the most significant elements in our lives. Some people appreciate that marrying for money rather than love is best thing while other argue that. I personally believe that both are very important for successful marriage life.
Certainly, money plays an essential part in our lives. It is hard for any person to accept their partner who does not have money or at least a job for take care of their family. Hence, ‘marry for money’ is acceptable for some extent. If they are away from money then they cannot survive for long even they may not able to fulfill their basic necessity which every inhabitant’s needs.
Furthermore, love should be the root of any marriage. Firstly, love is such a strong bond between two partners who have their own life and become one. So, they can share their feelings, happiness, sadness to overcome the difficulties together in their daily lives. Moreover, love makes people responsible not only for themselves but also toward their partner. Marrying for love is always encouraged.
In my opinion, I think love and money both are important. A marriage which relying on money that would disintegrate when the money running out. In contrary, a marriage which exist on love it would come to end when they could not earn to carry out their family obligations such as paying phone bills, grocery bills, etc. So both money and love should stand together even though their contribution could be unbalanced.
In conclude, marriage without either money or love would come to an unhappy end. So I believe that they both make their own contribution in a merry life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...hat marrying for money rather than love is best thing while other argue that. I persona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, at least, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92363636364 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5284000102 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1567284552 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271695431014 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109055885916 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926396926852 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162627675637 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445610250208 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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