It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this todays era, it is mandatory for teenagers to gain knowledge for the local history than the world.Children can know the basic fundamentals in their daily activities like news, historical places, political, general science, Transportations instead of versa.then the Younger will be affair on the geographical areas.
on the one hand, I have agreed that in all schools the teachers have to teach classes regarding newspapers related topics. Someway, they can acquire some subject on the specific field. At home also parents has to discuss with him or her in the concern matter.it must be implemented in all the educational institutions then the boy or girl learn the domestic gossips. If he or she grasp the old days certainly, for them easy to grip future.Every children has to maintain the patriotism.Freedom fighters was fights about the country because to get the independent country.
On the other every one should learn about the global then they it shall be easily for them when travel to international places.which will
eradicate the basic communication with the foreigners as per their language.they can communicate easily in professional life.
In conclusion,i believe that youngones should acquire the knowledge on local and international history in schooling stage.so, it will give more advantages for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23116906316 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6123239993 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.714285714 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175103090747 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670823820991 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575122952998 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899768672026 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058875850658 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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