Many childrean these day have their own mobile phones. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also has some drawbacks. Both these sides will discussed in this essay.
Generally, the mobile phone will certainly bring about many advantages. first, the mobile phone is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, we can contact easily with our friends and our relative wherever by calling or sending messages. Second, the mobile phone is also a means of entertainment for people. we can listen to music and play games on mobile phone. moreover, by using the latest apps for smartphones , we can get access to to the internet to watch Film and check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. last, if we have a smart phone in hand, our studying becomes more effective such as look up dictionary, find out many source of reference on internet which is useful for studying.
On the other hand, the mobile phone is also many disadvantage. first, telephone user become to addicted their mobile phone if they are too depends on it, moreover, the ability of human communication is limited if the mobile phone is more present in some event such as class meetings, on the bus, in the park…some people only focus on their phone without communicating. The use of mobile phones too much will make people take a lot of time , it not only influence on study results, makes students distraction but also it is cause of disease about eyes. last, we shouldn't use mobile phone while we are driving because it can lead traffic accidents.
In conclusion, mobile phone is necessary for our modern lives today. However it is helpful or not , which depends on our ways of using it. it will be better if we use it true purpose and in an proper time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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...better if we use it true purpose and in an proper time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53922614947 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1171885814 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217303798141 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905708236429 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607800352272 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136807287726 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542088746072 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.