The following bar chart compares production and consumption of electricity into top 10 ten countries in the year of 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh.
It is apparent that all the high ranked countries produced more electricity rather than consumed except Germany. China accounted for production and consumption of highest amount of current whereas Korea Republic hold the last position.
Over 5000 billion kWh of current both generated and utilized by people of china which is shown on the graph. In country ranking, USA came next and hold the second position. The figures for manufacturing and dissipating electricity in USA about 4000 and 3800 billion kWh respectively. By contrast, least amount of electricity consumed by Korea Rep. among all countries and difference between production and consumption is approximately 35 billion kWh only. So limited quantity of electricity stored in Korea Rep.
On the other hand, figure for electricity consumption is almost same for Canada, France and Brazil which is more or less 460 billion kWh. In Germany, electricity consumed more rather than production and the shortage is near about 60 billion kWh. Russia and Japan showed large production and utilization of electricity resulting more than 800 billion kWh as compared to India.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...the year of 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh. It is apparent that all the hig...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...ccounted for production and consumption of highest amount of current whereas Korea Republi...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...00 billion kWh respectively. By contrast, least amount of electricity consumed by Korea...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...billion kWh only. So limited quantity of electricity stored in Korea Rep. On t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36945812808 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88827106299 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.3925053995 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192827861466 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865538111627 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807926282104 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145655176794 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066427120589 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...the year of 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh. It is apparent that all the hig...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...ccounted for production and consumption of highest amount of current whereas Korea Republi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...00 billion kWh respectively. By contrast, least amount of electricity consumed by Korea...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...billion kWh only. So limited quantity of electricity stored in Korea Rep. On t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36945812808 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88827106299 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.3925053995 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192827861466 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865538111627 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807926282104 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145655176794 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066427120589 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.