The barcharts denote the number of bachelors, master degrees, and PhDs not being abe to possess a full time job categorized in four sectors in 2008 in the Uk. Based on the trends most of the graduated in both sections pefer to continue the education, however, a tiny fraction intent to work as a volunteer.
It is conspicuous that first presence of graduates was higher education, afterward part time jobs. As can be seen further study was chosen approximately twice as many as part time work, 29665 and just beneath 18000, respectively. When it comes to voluntary work and being unemployed, underpayment was prefered five times as many as being a volenteer worker. The number of unemployment was roughly 16000 and Voluntary work was 35000.
As the same, the number of post graduates having Prefered further study was just under 3000 ,which was the highest choice, in the second place part time work was favored by 2535. The other students prefered being unemployed rather than Voluntary work. In detail unemployment preference was about five times more than voluntary works.
It is quiet evidence that the number of graduates were ten times as many as post graduates ,however, it is noticable that these two bar charts oscilating almost the same as each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...es, and PhDs not being abe to possess a full time job categorized in four sectors in 2008...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...aduates was higher education, afterward part time jobs. As can be seen further study was ...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s chosen approximately twice as many as part time work, 29665 and just beneath 18000, res...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...efered further study was just under 3000 ,which was the highest choice, in the sec...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...the highest choice, in the second place part time work was favored by 2535. The other stu...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...were ten times as many as post graduates ,however, it is noticable that these two ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99528301887 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6672390769 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0390259637 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111340053647 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533359005446 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219666266717 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764964343582 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013487729005 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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