Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am humbly accept the invation about the speech that I will give it at international meeting at ZZZ college.
I would like to suggest the date on 1st of August because that is the very first day at meeting so I prefer a good start. My speech will have 3 parts. Firstly, introduce the history of my country and let all the guests have a main concept, then, I will concentrate to talk about the recent event in China, which is how the people celebrite spring festival in the family becuase that is the most important thing in my country. Finally, I would like to deliver how Chinese welcome everyone come and view that land wholeheartedly.
To be honest, I never been to ZZZ college before so I hope you could arrange a laptop, a projector and a well-sounded microphone so I am able to give a good speech.
Thank you for giving me this amazing opportunity and I would not let you down.
Yours faithfully,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accepted'.
Suggestion: accepted
...riting to let you know that I am humbly accept the invation about the speech that I wi...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...land wholeheartedly. To be honest, I never been to ZZZ college before so I hope you cou...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43888888889 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60016025147 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3505615687 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25589091454 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994908832083 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639865272296 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139566681865 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744961449791 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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