Every vietnamese individual need to start up to contribute significantly to
the country? Do you agree or disagree.
As the economy is advancing in leaps and bounds, it cannot be denied the significant
emerging of businesses and large companies on recent years. From my perspective, placing an
emphasis on startup among individual in developing countries such as Vietnam is completely
appropriate.
To commence with, startup create multiple opportunities for people to get a job. it is
acknowledged that in Vietnam, there is an increase in the immigration from rural to urban with
a view to making ends meet to support their facilities. However, along with a large number of
unemployed citizens, high cost living in the city promote substantial demand for occupation.
Without entrepreneurial businesses, the combination of unemployment and poverty will be a
huge hindrance to the national economy which may lead to the economic undevelopment and
social instability .
Secondly, business is one òf the most indispensable source of finance of a nation when they
successfully start up. Not only does this stand a good chance of helping our country become
more prosperous, flourishing so ás to enhance the ability to keep abreast of other powerful
nations but this success also making a name for our motherland. Furthermore, with visionary
and talented entrepreneurs such as Bill Gates, Steve jobs , they can gain their laurels over the
world by developing and trading influential softwares and products, which making their dreams
of changing the world come true.
In conclusion, startups, particularly high-potential ones, are responsible for nearly all net job
growth, and have a fundamental impact on overall economic productivity in our economy. In
other words, startup in Vietnam will contribute considerably to our nation without doubt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57835820896 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19676834418 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679104477612 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1090718772 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063779875437 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245954944705 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310984069226 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0165732770758 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036893042231 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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