Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. (January 2020, Uzbekistan)
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are those who maintain that confusing circumstances are something cannot be avoided and people have to accept it, while it is commonly argued that human beings can be in control of any bad situation, and they can develop themselves better in the future. In this essay, I will prove why both of these opinions are reasonable and demonstrate my own perspective.
On the one hand, suffering from trauma is unpredictable and not so many of the masses can be strong enough to face to it. An illustration for this idea is when a mother lose her child in an accident or in a birthing room. Bitter as she may be, she will have to accept the fact because she cannot make any changes to such kind of thing. Moreover, everything in this world has two sides of the problem. For example, a man who have a 5-to-9 job and some extra part-times may suffer from anxiety, however, he would like not to dispute anything due to the later happiness that he will have an acceptable salary.
On the other hand, few would firmly believe that difficulties are the motivations to help them improve better in the future. To their mind, they cannot be in the poverty or working for a company which causes daily stress. For instance, people who are not better-off will day-by-day find a suitable strategy to improve the quality of life rather than accept their living with poorness. To be more precise, if human beings work with effort, they can easily deal with any kind of adversity.
In short, vast of majority will choose to move on after a hardship while few of them might be self-developed through difficulties. In my opinion, both of these viewpoints are positive thinking apart from suicide or holding any bad thought when in fierce circumstances. People have to decide a better way, which they find the most suitable, to reach their happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in short, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72360248447 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62735305335 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3879412369 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137338501923 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044563312859 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360003534617 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833485418907 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148299739535 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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