Now children do not behavior as well as the children did in the past. Which one of the following measure do you think can help children (age 5~10) behave better?
A. Control the time they spend on TV or movie.
B. Take more time to chat with children.
C. Monitor the interaction between children and their peers.
Being a parent, requires a great amount of attention, patience and energy for teaching the children to behave appropriately. The greatest responsibility lies on parents in training process of their children for a more healthy and appropriate behavior. Previously children tend to behave better than they do nowadays. There are a great number of strategies for development of children’s behavior. Exercising control over the duration of time children spend in front of TV, allocating more time to communicate and chat with them and to observe and monitor the interaction of children with their peers are amongst the most effective strategies for improvement of children’s behavior. From my point of view allocating more time to be spent with children seems more fruitful due to two reasons which I will discuss below.
One of the advantages of spending more time with children and chatting with them is that parents will be able to provide a warm and friendly atmosphere at home. The more friendly and tight-knit the atmosphere of home becomes, children will tend to stay at home more. This increases the time children spend at home and with their parents therefore, parents can easily observe and control the behavior of their own children and children are less prone to be influenced by outside factors such as friends or other strangers. For instance a male child who spends most of his time with his parents specially with father chatting, watching football and playing games will spend less time outside the house with friends. In addition the child will be encouraged and be directed towards more healthy activities by parents such as reading books, magazines and newspapers instead of wasting time on harmful video games.
The other benefit of spending more time and chatting with children is about the growing intimacy between parent and child. Increasing the intimacy in child-parent relationship enables the child to be more comfortable and confident to discuss his/her problems, fears and needs with parents. Nowadays that the child-parent relationships is more shattered and each suffer from a lack of intimacy with each other, providing such comfort within parental relationship is very helpful. For better clarification, imagine a child who is able to easily communicate with his parents and he is facing problem in school and is bullied by other students. When he is able to discuss the problem with parents, they can take necessary steps for punishment of those students and come up with possible solutions to solve their child’s problem and protect him from possible damages and injuries.
Monitoring the interaction of children with their peers is another possible strategy which will be fruitful. However it demands more time for observing the interaction and sometimes it is impossible since children spend time with their peers in school, gym, play grounds and etc away from parents where they will not be able to observe them. Controlling the time children spend to watch TV and movies seems helpful but it will not be as effective as other strategies since children will break the rules and watch TV or movies stealthily or in absence of parents.
To summarize, I believe that training children to behave appropriately is one of the most difficult responsibilities of parents. Among great number of strategies to improve behavior of children, spending more time with them and chatting seems more effective which makes the atmosphere of home more friendly and increases the intimacy in parent-child relationship. Controlling the time spend for watching TV or movie and observing the interaction of children with their peers are possible fruitful solutions but they have their own shortcomings. These strategies help parents in training process of children that will make them to behave healthily and appropriately in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 10.4138276553 365% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 41.998997996 233% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3246.0 1615.20841683 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 618.0 315.596192385 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84163588125 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409385113269 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.9 506.74238477 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1157747057 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.130434783 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8695652174 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91304347826 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40979997757 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16466337556 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090987379593 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293608752159 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103441311316 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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