drug testing
It is about human treatment with an animal in biology science according to the passage and lectures some animals like chimpanzees has 99% genes like a human and has the same reaction. These animals have the same function in their life as a human. Biologists use these animals to tests new drugs that scientists discover it and if the drug has a good effect on animals, they use it for humans. For example, Penicillin at first test on animals and it can improve them after that is used for sick human and it had a good effect.
Some people are concern about human behavior with animals, and they believe drug testing on an animal can hurt them. They mentioned some drugs such as Aspirin has not any effect on horses even with high doses. They agree with the idea that scientists should be the reduction of human suffering. But biologists believe the animal's reaction to these drugs is a good guide for them and it can be helpful. Scientists say they provide a clean and comfortable place for animals, and they care for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or sick human and it had a good effect. Some people are concern about human beha...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...n suffering. But biologists believe the animals reaction to these drugs is a good guide...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce for animals, and they care for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 407.700716846 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58152173913 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32114850613 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2960963117 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212363230985 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103194673613 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118441020683 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184062253048 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00115951189026 0.0645574589148 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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