Part-time employment – application letter
You are looking for part-time employment.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter
•introduce yourself
•explain what type of work you are looking for
•say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir / Madam,
With this letter, I would like to introduce myself and explain what kind of work I am looking for. My name is Verhulst Heidi, I am 30 years of age and a single mother of two wonderful kids.
As you will be aware of, it is not so easy to find an employment that you can combine with two little children. Therefore, I am looking for a part-time employment, mainly during school hours.
Previously, I have worked for 8 years as a medical secretary in a private practice of three doctors. Six months ago, my husband died, and it was no longer possible to combine the full-time employment with the education of my kids, so I had to give my notice. I have been at home since, but I would really like to get back to work part- time.
I would therefore like you to consider me should your employment agency get any demand for a part-time medical secretary.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs Verhulst Heidi
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 174 200
No. of Characters: 739 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.247 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.459 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.826 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.797 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4