Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In world, it is a big challenge regarding to prevention of global climate change. some people argue that this is individual's responsibility, while other think that this is the responsibility of governments and multinational companies.
On first hand, some believe that they should pay attention at this problem individually and to improve their life style. For instance , how they dispose of their rubbish, how to reuse of water and plastic things. every people should not through plastic bottles, bags and so many things. Due to those activities , the climate change related issue may control. my aunt , who is science teacher, knows this problem properly, so she is very careful about her house rubbish and adivises to her neighbours.
On the other hand, other people believe that the governments and multinational companies should consider this matter. first, governments should appoint new committees, who work on this problem. Second, give authorities whenever necessary, they take action against of disobeying rules. Third, big companies should careful about their disposal of water and solid wastes. In addition to these companies should cooperate with governments rules. they should not free harmful gases in atmosphere. they should first filter the harmful gases. my father's friends, who is social worker, frequently goes to different companies with his team to check the quality of water & solid wastes , which are free by companies.
To sum up, every citizens, governments and big companies ought to pay attention for reducing global climate change by understanding their responsibilities. In my view, this is every citizens' responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54330708661 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97100170318 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.305275324 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8235294118 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157002505818 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509809961247 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561273848969 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11454033349 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658790471386 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.