Dear Mr John,
I am writing this letter to discuss regarding the increment in the rent. I am very sorry to say that I am not agreed with it.
As you know, I received the notice from you last week. It was written on the letter that price of rent will be increased by 10 percent from next month. However, as per the agreement between us that rent will be increased at 10 percent on annually basis on which we both agreed. But you are raising it after 6 months which will not be acceptable.
It is requested that please consider my valid reasons regarding this matter. However, if you do not agree with it then I would take you to the court under the act of discrimination as it is against the clause of the contract. Moreover, I will vacant the premise and break this tenancy by the end of this month.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Warm wishes
Gurjeet
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... Looking forward to hearing from you Warm wishes Gurjeet
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...ward to hearing from you Warm wishes Gurjeet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42592592593 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36171419717 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.838900784 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281280409337 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100789821682 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746119139749 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138413668557 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950274712019 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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