The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
It is true that myriads of terrestrial and marine animals are on the verge of extinction due to human beings. My essay will shed light on the causes and measures to this issue.
It goes without saying that human beings is to blame for the mass extinction of animals. First and foremost, inhabitants are discharging wastes and middens directly into the sea. For example, in 2016, vietnam witnessed a marine life disaster which is triggered by local ppl dumping domestically waste illegally into the ocean through underground channels. This practice not only contaminated ground water but also leads to the shrinking habitat of several marine creatures. Another reason is that human beings are exploiting natural resources to make way for concrete jungle, which poses a great threat to the natural habitat of animals. To be more specific, ppl has been taking land for buildings and farmings to serves the purpose of urbanization, which comes at the expense of the deforestation and. If uncontrollable destruction of habitats keeps happening, wild animals will have no room to neither survive nor breed, so the worst case scenario, which is mass extinction, could be expected.
Having said that, feasible measures can be taken to curb animal extinction. First, each government should levy exorbitant fines on devastating behaviors such as littering, illegal dumping or other environmental offences. The implementation of stringent laws, accompanied by extensive media coverage of the issue would raise environmental awareness among all sections of the society. Second, international organizations such as the United Nations should coordinate activities among member countries as well as encourage participation by the private sector to promote sustainable use of the world’s natural resources. Specifically, the presence of such inter-governmental organizations plays a major role in initiating negotiations on reducing industrial pollution level or other toxic waste.
In short, the blame for the most recent mass extinction is not natural calamities - it’s human. Therefore, several solutions need to be done to tackle this worrying trend and save endangered species from the brink of extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the causes and measures to this issue. It goes without saying that human beings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in short, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54733727811 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11278354992 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659763313609 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5517820041 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163406750075 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480928877639 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577242042686 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101667757484 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470121347715 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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