International travel is becoming coming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourist
do the advantage of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages
It is argued that traveling abroad is increasingly becoming less expensive and nations are more likely to receive foreign people. This essay agrees that the benefits of people traveling to another country, such as the improvement in local economy and a greater relationship between governments, are stronger than the possible drawbacks.
The foremost advantage of receiving international visitors is the enhancement of the economical situation of a country. As greater number of tourists a region allows to visit them, the biggest profit local government would make. Therefore, the nation become wealthier and can improve the infrastructure and supplies to the community. As consequence, the quality of life of individuals would increase. To illustrate this, traveling to Brazil is really popular destination due to the fact that the flights are economical and the access is straighforward, thus, the incomes from tourism helped the brazilian authorities to feed poor people and to build new roads.
A possible drawback of receiving a plethora of visitors as a nation is the loss on the cultural identity. That is to say that regions that have a lot of tourist rounding the area, are more cosmopolitan. Hence, locals tend to be less traditional and are at risk of loosing their cultural background. For example, Peru has a lot of visitors per year and in modern times it is believed that their culture is not as unique as in former times because of the mixure of nationalities visiting the site.
To conclude, there is no doubt that there are more opportunities for people to travel and easier ways to enter to a country. In my opinion the drawback of diminishing the cultural identity as a nation, is shadowed by the benefits of having a surplus incomes from tourism that permits government to make a greater profits and therefore improve people’s level of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...onal visitors is the enhancement of the economical situation of a country. As greater numb...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'visiting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: visiting
...ater number of tourists a region allows to visit them, the biggest profit local governme...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'income'?
Suggestion: income
...wed by the benefits of having a surplus incomes from tourism that permits government to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, therefore, thus, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99988608154 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3505282799 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156398957487 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561891791992 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579275059776 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905954078764 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244496370471 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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