Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe a secured job is more crucial than being satisfied with a job while others believe vice versa. I will discuss both opinions throughout this essay and give my opinion which is on the side of the latter view.
Starting with job security, being an employee with a fixed contract for long years is comes with financial stability. This is because, regardless of the possible mistakes that might a one can do at work, having a solid employment contract would clear the air in terms of staying at that job, therefore this individual can build a financial security. For instance, an employee with a job contract can buy expensive possessives such as a car, a home by getting a loan from a bank. Since this person knows that financially he can afford to paying this debt due to the fact that having a reliable job, every month with a fix amount he can handle and buy things.
On the other hand, being satisfied in work environment not only affect workers well-being in a positive way, but also might increase the efficiency of the worker as well. Because, the more people feel happy about what they do for a living, the more they want to involve in this field by providing their productivity at the highest. For example, happy employees from a sale department of one company may have a strength connection with the clients and thus, the sales of a company may boost.
To conclude, although secured job provides economic stability and allows individuals to invest in what they want easily, I believe being happy and feeling satisfied with a job is more important as this situation effect the individuals state of mind and make them more productive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ment not only affect workers well-being in a positive way, but also might increase the efficiency...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57686588943 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7768287944 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269723878773 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117195948824 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119248499963 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207746203554 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139049186672 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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