Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What is the cause of freshwater pollution and what measure could government and individual take to respond to this problem?
fresh water is becoming higher in demand these days and this is turning into an urgent global issues. this essay will discuss the factors contributing to this problem and possible solutions to it.
First of all, a lack of fresh water can be a result of overpopulation in urban areas. The more people crowd up in the big cities, and the more these cities expand, the more water is used up. Along with the expansion of urban areas, the increase in recreational centers such as water parks and swimming pools also means that a lot more fresh water is used for these facilities. In addition, with industrialization, a great deal of fresh water is used for manufacturing processes, including cleaning equipment, or chemical reactions and so on. Furthermore, industrial waste are dumped into rivers and seas every day, polluting our water sources.
There are some feasible measures that the government can take to tackle this issue. One solution is that the government can invest in building water treatment plants, to recycle the used water for necessary practices, such as agricultural irrigation or flushing water. if used water is refined further, it can even be used for our daily activities. Another plausible solution is incorporating lessons on saving water into the curriculum and encourage people through the media to do so.
In conclusion, fresh water is a basic necessity of life and people overusing might lead to a scarcity if steps are not taken to prevent the loss of water, such as building more water treatment plants and spreading information on how to use water most economically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00751879699 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85616326697 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5055425316 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0508893700838 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031759292595 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529573920272 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043554373923 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438236297963 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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