For mental and physical growth leisure activities are very important .One ideology is that children should only send there free time on studies, otherwise it is not beneficial for individual .This essay will discuss the both pros and cons of the given notion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, in this modern the stress level is very high and leisure activities are only way to reduce this menace. One of the main merit of leisure activities are they help to maintain physical health. Because the movement of body help to improve physical fitness of of a child. Moreover , one another important point is that the children who spend their free time in extracurricular activities they can improve their mental health. Because human brain is required to do task and puzzles to make it more active and stay sharp. In recent survey done in Delhi shows that children who were involve in various of activities have more IQ then another children who were only focusing on studies.
Furthermore, continuous focusing only on studies can result in the problems of concentration and frustration. But if the one utilize free time by playing games or watching television can feel relax. In addition, engaging children in activities like singing ,dancing and so on ,improve their thinking power and creativity. For example,famous football player Cristiano Ronaldo used to play football as a leisure activity in his childhood. by improving his skills and doing hard work now he is one of the best player in all over the world.
To conclude, i believe that children should join other co-curricular activities in order to improve their basic knowledge. It should be the child who should have the final decision to choose any recreational activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07291666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74137554978 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9445476845 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164888209636 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561748482023 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336911827899 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10439698187 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175591108268 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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